Journal

Today we have a mini crit to present to the class of what our idea was. From our feedback we have thought more of the narrative on what we want in the story.

We came up with a few new idea with the chase scene. The girl shown being chased by the guy but at the end it works out that another girls is tracking him and using the other girl as 'bate'.

Also we came up of a way to start the video with having a shot of the feet and them walking slowly them dropping a rose from the person and landing on the floor. From this the audience can establish who the song is by.j